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A Poem

Who…Am I?
Where am…I?

A blank paper forms lines
Written by unknown memories
Whispers from past thoughts
Combining letters in waves

Word by word, bleeding through the paper, ink
Fingers acting of their own accord
Tips leaving prints on a borrowed pen

The words form lines
The lines, stanzas
Stanzas stack to form a poem

The Sailor

A poem swims in an open sea
White space breaking on stark black lines

A lonely ship sailing home
Once lost on forlorn shores

A tear of joy it’s sailor’s eye
Shed for his landlocked love

A long hard war, waged on foreign shores
Oh, how much time he had lost
And how his heart, it stung
For as he pulled his boat ashore
Her funeral had begun

Message in a Bottle

As he spread her ashes
In the waves of the cove’s round shore
The young lad he had left behind
Lent him a crying shoulder
As the grown man he had become

From his home, a wife he chose
From little babe, a child he raised

On the sailor’s lap, the child sat
Of his life, tales told
All lessons learned, he passed along
To help her grow up with wisdom

Put the sailor, this cherished memory
Into a bottle sealed with wax
and thrown into the sea
For someone on the other side to find
A story of love trapped in glass
©2009-2010 ~Darkpoet837
:icondarkpoet837:

Author's Comments

I wrote this on the way back from Six Flags, in around thirty minutes or so. It is really three seperate poems that flow together for one bigger poem. The first poem, is called A Poem. The second part, is called The Sailor. The third part is A Mesage in a Bottle.

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:iconnightshades-water:
Wow Axel! Really nice job here. It flowed ever so nicely. =)

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"Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe." ----Albert Einstein
:icondarkpoet837:
Thank you =D. Hehe, flowed, makes a good pun =P

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Take a pizza with thickness a, and radius z.
Its volume can be writen as Pi*z*z*a

Come, be my light.
Mingle with my darkness
May we mix to create
Our own twilight sunset
The dusk breeze
Spreading clouds
On our murky horizon
~Darkpoet837~
:iconnightshades-water:
Hehe, you're welcome =)

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"Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe." ----Albert Einstein
:iconironicmaiden:
I liked it the second time i read it even better than the first and so on... HAPPY BIRTHDAY SON!!!

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well-behaved women seldom make history>
all men were NOT created equally, but the bullet knows no difference
:icondarkpoet837:
Thanks mom =D

--
Take a pizza with thickness a, and radius z.
Its volume can be writen as Pi*z*z*a

Come, be my light.
Mingle with my darkness
May we mix to create
Our own twilight sunset
The dusk breeze
Spreading clouds
On our murky horizon
~Darkpoet837~

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